Feedback for stories by Durin

[Durin]

Hello Everyone,

I have written a few WG Story threads. Three in fact that are currently incomplete. They are all incomplete because I usually write when I have more time and I keep posting them like a serial of old.

Anyone have any feedback for:

Donut Girls

Hogswatch

Moon Stories

 

[Risible]

 

[BTB]

 

[Lardibutts]

 

[Durin]

 

[Ravens-son]

 

[Durin]

 

[fat hiker]