the key to better writing?

[MissToodles]

Even with a degree, I need help! I use the passive voice way too much, write run-ons, and just can't seem to nail it. I feel like a hopeless cause. Any tips besides the obvious (PRACTICE)? By the way, I'm very good at correcting papers but have trouble writing. I think it may have to do with a short attention span.

 

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