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Balancing the tone of a romantic short story

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ODFFA

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Poetry writing has been my thing up until discovering the inspiration that is this library.

Wordless Rehabilitation is the very first story of any kind I have started to spew forth. My main dilemma is balancing the tone of it. Although it chiefly deals with college-age romance, I just..... would prefer it not sounding entirely like Sweet Valley High? :p But I wonder if I don't err on the side of overly descriptive highbrow-ness. Sentence length might be one thing to be aware of there.

Then there's flow and pacing. Ugh. I never realised just how hard it can be reading back your own work and trying to objectively determine whether it actually reads well.

Any inputs from fellow writers - and fellow readers - are most welcome.
 

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